Dusk

[OviV]

Took this picture this weekend on a deserted beach in S. Florida. I would love some criticism.

http://www.shareapicture.com/vsalbum/getpic.aspx?fld=/OviV/Photography/2004-01-19%20Key%20Biscayne&pic=117_1747_RT8.jpg&OV=0

Ovi

[gsmx2]

If you love critism, you don't know how to spell criticism. :twisted:

Now regarding your picture. I like it. Nice color in the sky; good contrast and composition, definitely draw the eye into the picture.

Too bad about the buildings in the distance, but they are there, so they are there.

Good job and sorry I couldn't be more critical...I know how you love critism.

gsm x2

[roanjohn]

Maybe if you saturate the orange background a little bit.............

But thats up to you...........As it stands, it looks pretty good. Good composition and exposure :-)

Thanks for sharing.

Ro1

[OviV]

If you love critism, you don't know how to spell criticism. :twisted: gsm x2

O.k. wise guy I fixed it. :lol:

Thanks for the input guys and gals. Do you think I should clone out the buildings? They kind of bother me also. Damned civilization. :)

Ovi

[Ikinaa]

If you love critism, you don't know how to spell criticism. :twisted: gsm x2

O.k. wise guy I fixed it. :lol:

Thanks for the input guys and gals. Do you think I should clone out the buildings? They kind of bother me also. Damned civilization. :)

Ovi

You could always pretend they're clouds (though funny ones :twisted: )

[gsmx2]

If you love critism, you don't know how to spell criticism. :twisted: gsm x2

O.k. wise guy I fixed it. :lol:

Thanks for the input guys and gals. Do you think I should clone out the buildings? They kind of bother me also. Damned civilization. :)

Ovi

Ovi,

I think you should give it a try and see if you get a good product. Just keep the original in case.

gsm x2

[xxlt]

OviV ~~Hello :D
I like your photo, and I enjoyed looking @ your photo albums..Nice work.
The fishing looks Really Fantastic down your way! Shameless plug..for I am coming to Miami next month. Maybe I missed it, but what camera are you using? Thanks for posting..and nice to meet you... :)

bill from Ohio w/DRebel

[OviV]

Bill,
Nice to meet you too.

Fishing is my other money-robbing hobby. ;)

I have a Digital Rebel that I have owned since November. I am still learning. You are coming down in Sail Fish and King Fish season. Those are our primary targets this time of year. Only things that keep me in Miami is family and fishing.

Ovi

[OviV]

O.K. I made some changes:

1)Buildings Cloned out:
http://www.shareapicture.com/vsalbum/getpic.aspx?fld=\OviV\Photography\2004-01-19%20Key%20Biscayne&pic=117_1747_RT8_NoBuilding.jp g&OV=0

2)Buildings cloned out and saturation increased on reds and yellows:
http://www.shareapicture.com/vsalbum/getpic.aspx?fld=\OviV\Photography\2004-01-19%20Key%20Biscayne&pic=117_1747_RT8_NB_HRY.jpg&OV =0

[xxlt]

OviV ~~~Yes I hope to wet a line while there 8)
Looking forward to seeing some more boating photos from you! :D
Looking forward to meeting you..if all works out 8)

[OviV]

OviV ~~~Yes I hope to wet a line while there 8)
Hope you don't mind but I played with your picture. I was just trying to set a different mood.
bill fr Ohio DRebel


I don't mind at all Bill. Seems a bit harsh for my taste. I am still hesitant to do a lot of editing on my pictures. It feels like cheating ;).

Shoot me an e-mail a week or so before you head down and maybe if I am heading out that week we can hook up for some fishing.

Ovi

[mvrekum]

I like the original image best. Leave the buildings in the picture.
The only thing you need to add is a little text like "Greetings from..." :)