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Jubilee32
13th of November 2006 (Mon), 18:07
Would like C/C on this. Taken in mid October,

I combined 2 exposures for this. I am interested in overall critique. I do realize more time has to be spent on the small details, I am wondering if I am on the right track.

Good news is that it "looks like" I remember it . . .

Robert_Lay
13th of November 2006 (Mon), 20:20
The horizon seems to be tilted slightly clockwise and the areas of interest are too centered - otherwise a very decent composition.

The tonal balance seems to be very good with good detail in shadow, mid-range and highlight areas.

Most image processing software can provide the needed rotation.

Jubilee32
13th of November 2006 (Mon), 20:32
Thank you - I appreciate your opinion. There were two or three other photogs to my left and a couple to my right, all in the field of view if I shifted. I was afraid to spend the time moving. I DO agree with your comment on centering. I did not see the tilt but you are absolutely right. A fresh eye works wonders . . .