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welshphreak
1st of February 2004 (Sun), 15:59
My first posting on here from a very amateur budding photographer. Taken at the US War Cemetary in Normandy. I think I oversharpened it but apart from that im sure there are a million other improvments that can be made. All comments good and bad welcomed!

http://www.pbase.com/image/25678073

:arrow: Dave

CyberDyneSystems
1st of February 2004 (Sun), 16:21
Nice image...


...but boy did the artist get American Youth wrong! :roll:

A modern interpritation would have a fat kid with a bad back and poor eysite sitting on a sofa staring at the Nintendo! :wink:

welshphreak
2nd of February 2004 (Mon), 15:35
Thanks for the comment CyberDyne!

ryuwulf
2nd of February 2004 (Mon), 22:04
Could you by any chance add color to the clouds??
i like what you were trying to accomplish. Red was awesome i just thought the sky would finish it off.
Croping off the bottom a bit so that the base would be the red.

just a thought. Good pic

Grubby
13th of March 2004 (Sat), 21:20
Thats my kind of shot......

Nice job on the flowers.

Volatile
14th of March 2004 (Sun), 20:33
Unfortunate timing with the diretion of light, but the light on the loin cloth is distracting. You should've rotated the statue a bit so the light hit from the front a little more.

OviV
15th of March 2004 (Mon), 09:39
I like it a lot. Is there a specific technique for that effect other then masking out all the flowers individually?