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djscottwalls
29th of November 2006 (Wed), 15:28
One of my friends came over and he allowed me take pictures of him.
Please C & C, I want to know what people think.


http://www.aswphotoonline.com/other1/b.jpg

Thanks
Scott

hawk911
29th of November 2006 (Wed), 15:34
Mug shot with a smile or driver's license photo. He needs to look less posed- my amateur opinion

Rhinotherunt
29th of November 2006 (Wed), 15:45
Not bad, but next time try to have more distance between the subject and the wall. Also, you need a little more head room...

LBaldwin
30th of November 2006 (Thu), 03:44
Mug shot with a smile or driver's license photo. He needs to look less posed- my amateur opinion

I agree with you !!

Next time have him turn either away from or toward the light source. Get some sort of expression so that the eyes and mouth are in cahoots with one another. Right now he does not look quite connected to reality.

I don't mind the shadow if make use of it in the image as an element. But I think that this was a quick shot before he ran out the door.

Les

ABrownPhoto
30th of November 2006 (Thu), 04:53
not too bad!!! i like the lighting and the hair.

I would personally like to see him further from the wall, but still a really nice job!