Southern California Vinyard...

[Laramie]

Critiques and comments welcome.

http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f282/tylerpebley/vinyard.jpg

[mlc]

There seems to be too much sky which is not overly interesting. I also prefer the leading line to run left to right - perhaps because I am right handed or because
I am used to writing that way across a page. Finally - is it straight - it looks to be sloping down right to left a little?

Here is a possible alternative addressing the first two issues

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[gkuenning]

The vineyard itself is too dark for my taste. I'd suggest splitting it into two layers, keeping the exposure of the sky but lightening the vineyard. I also like mic's crop. Here's my version:

[Laramie]

Thanks for the comments. Here's same vinyard, looking opposite direction. It was winter time so I tried to bring the greens out a bit during post processing. I think this one looks much better.

http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f282/tylerpebley/vinyardfix.jpg

[darktiger]

The first picture is kind of dark..The last picture is not that bad. I would prob bring out the yellow also...