Building abstracted?

[cocheese20]

Maybe just lensbabie-ified??
I can't think of a good title for this. But tell me what you think of it anyway. Taken with a Lensbaby. I think it turned out pretty well, although I don't know if there is enough sharpness in the focused area. Or maybe too much blur everywhere else. So...Does this work or not? let me know! what can I do to improve??

http://static.flickr.com/113/307329763_8ebfd98f17_b.jpg

[cocheese20]

Anyone??

[Jim G]

Hmmm... It doesn't so much work for me - possibly becaues I can't really identify the subject. There's no real interest in the foreground/background either and the sky isn't really dramatic or of much interest... just imho :) What were you going for here?

[cocheese20]

well, I'm not sure exactly what I was going for. I just liked the colors and reflection. Its just an old building I stumbled accross that is near an aircraft making plant.