Fashion - Breakdown

[bbb]

Thought I'd have a go at a fashion shoot at the weekend....

http://www.grantgb.com/temp/breakdown.jpg

...C&C welcome :)

[radloser]

loose the uv lense or use a hood, im guessing the spot on the upper left is from the UV filter. maybe a little fill flash, but i like the shot though

[bullet33912]

Nice composition and thought into the shot. The flare's a little heavy for me.

[infinite012]

I like the flare. Makes it look like the models are looking at it lol

[ABrownPhoto]

I think the flare can stay or go, doesn't really bother me. As for models, the lady is a bit dark... other than that i like it!

nice job

[IIIMik3]

Great idea, and fairly well executed.

I'm kinda on the fence about the flare, but i'm kinda thinking if you're gonna have it, you should have exaggerated it a little more, so that it doesn't just look like a mistake.

The female model is great. She did a great job of posing and giving off the perfect expression. I can't really say the same for the guy. He doesn't really seem to fit the image. The girl and surrounding match well, kinda grungy and dark, where as the guy (especially due to his hair and bright white sneakers) seems too clean cut and GQ-ish.

I think you've definitely got the potential, just needs to be thought out and worked a tiny bit more :)

[bbb]

Thanks for the feedback, some useful points there. I agree with the point about the trainers, I don't think they work :)

Here's another from the shoot....

http://www.grantgb.com/temp/music.jpg

[bbb]

And another...

http://www.grantgb.com/temp/sunset.jpg

[D. Craig Flory]

The last image would have been great if the camera was straight and level. Diagonal is the most dynamic composition there is ... if done with the location selected ... but not by tilting the camera. Do you have the same one without tilting ? I'd love to see it without tilting.

[bbb]

No, not without tilting.

I've got some more though...

http://www.grantgb.com/roadtrip/002.jpg

http://www.grantgb.com/roadtrip/003.jpg

http://www.grantgb.com/roadtrip/004.jpg

http://www.grantgb.com/roadtrip/005.jpg

http://www.grantgb.com/roadtrip/006.jpg

[ABrownPhoto]

I like your first 3 pictures the best! the others don't work all to much for me (given that the idea is "fashion !!

Nice work!