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Riccardo
8th of February 2004 (Sun), 07:27
Here some wiondows in my city.
http://img20.photobucket.com/albums/v60/ricfranz/City%20of%20Savona/Balcony.jpg

http://img20.photobucket.com/albums/v60/ricfranz/City%20of%20Savona/Balcone.jpg

http://img20.photobucket.com/albums/v60/ricfranz/City%20of%20Savona/Finestra.jpg

Grazie.
Ciao
Warman
9th of February 2004 (Mon), 06:12
impressive, impressive.
Second is for me the prettiest and i like it but if you had shot it while directly in front of the middle window it would have been perfect.
First one is a little tilted which is crummy so fix it plz.
Third is absolutely amazing with just the cloth hanging ropes to ruin it (clone out?) and i think the tilt works nice here. Its an impressive composition who speaks of the magesty of the old days and the poor reality of today. Remove the ropes and you have my most sincere congratulations on a brutal shot.
Riccardo
9th of February 2004 (Mon), 12:03
impressive, impressive.
First one is a little tilted which is crummy so fix it plz.

Remove the ropes and you have my most sincere congratulations on a brutal shot.

Thank you for you suggestion. I made it and changed.
Grazie
Ciao
Riccardo
roanjohn
9th of February 2004 (Mon), 13:44
Okay..........very nice!!!

I think I would prefer the windows centered on the 1st and 3rd shots.

Very good though!!!!

Thanks for sharing

Ro1
dds
9th of February 2004 (Mon), 15:22
Don't love too much the first one, but really like the second one and, especially, the third one.

DDS
dphoto
9th of February 2004 (Mon), 17:01
Wow, I love the concept and I love the shots! Sorry, nothing else to add here. Good job!

-Deva
ijohnson
10th of February 2004 (Tue), 10:18
The third one is great. Could you rotate it just a tad or is it you intention to have it unbalanced?

I love it.