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Rense
17th of December 2006 (Sun), 14:16
I went this morning to the Industrial zone of my hometown:

#1
http://rense.smugmug.com/photos/117311127-M.jpg (http://rense.smugmug.com/photos/newexif.mg?ImageID=117311127")

#2
http://rense.smugmug.com/photos/117311008-M.jpg (http://rense.smugmug.com/photos/newexif.mg?ImageID=117311008")

C&C greatly appreciated.

MattPollitt
17th of December 2006 (Sun), 14:27
I love your contrast on #2. The front building has some blown out highlights, but I'm glad the whole building isn't. Very lovely sky, how'd you go about making it sepia?

#1... Just doesn't do much for me. The subjects are too small and far away to be appreciated, unlike the building, which is fine. I don't like the underexposed rocks on the left, while the whole sky on the right is blown out.

Rense
17th of December 2006 (Sun), 14:53
Matt,
Thanks for your honest remarks, I can learn a lot of it.
Sepia for #2 is a good idea. And for #1: it was my idea to have it all on one photo.