girl taking time out. [Archive] - Canon Digital Photography Forums

lycan

1st of January 2007 (Mon), 23:01

This was a small shoot i did for a friend in the park.

http://image-cache.boostcruising.com/forums/uploads/post-14138-11572429521852032275.jpg

jaydoug

1st of January 2007 (Mon), 23:57

color seems off.. I had the same problem in Savannah with overcast this weekend :(

lycan

2nd of January 2007 (Tue), 00:12

color seems off.. I had the same problem in Savannah with overcast this weekend :(

there was heaps of colour in the photo..

i pp it and De-sat the colour out.

ashleymcnamara

2nd of January 2007 (Tue), 00:13

Nice shot. I like the desaturated look on this.,

jmanser

2nd of January 2007 (Tue), 00:30

I love the composition.. very nice!

ABrownPhoto

2nd of January 2007 (Tue), 04:03

composition, lighting, pose, crop, lighting all work for me! very nice job and i am diggin' the PP here!

lycan

2nd of January 2007 (Tue), 05:28

Thanks heaps for the comments.

As i took this photograph i know it was SOME THING good.

D. Craig Flory

2nd of January 2007 (Tue), 09:25

I like the railing acting as a leading line ... drawing us right to the gorgeous young lady. The saturation is now too low. I'd rather see a bit more saturation, and mid-tones, or fully black & white.

This would work better if most of the top was cropped off. The white areas and the vertical spikes draw too much attention.

Overall, an image with a lot of impact. I wish you had it checked for us to post alternative versions.

lycan

8th of January 2007 (Mon), 00:54

I like the railing acting as a leading line ... drawing us right to the gorgeous young lady. The saturation is now too low. I'd rather see a bit more saturation, and mid-tones, or fully black & white.

This would work better if most of the top was cropped off. The white areas and the vertical spikes draw too much attention.

Overall, an image with a lot of impact. I wish you had it checked for us to post alternative versions.

Here you go. Make the alternative versions as you wish.

I would love to see what you's can do to this photograph.

Rhinotherunt

8th of January 2007 (Mon), 09:37

I really like how you have lines leading the viewer into the image. I would recommend applying a warm photo filter or a sepia photo filter. I like the desaturation, but it needs an over tone IMHO.

lycan

15th of January 2007 (Mon), 01:55

I really like how you have lines leading the viewer into the image. I would recommend applying a warm photo filter or a sepia photo filter. I like the desaturation, but it needs an over tone IMHO.

Thanks for the info..:D