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Graphyfotoz
2nd of January 2007 (Tue), 19:07
Is this too "busy"?

I'm open to idea's!

http://graphyfotoz.smugmug.com/photos/120598298-L.jpg

stupot
2nd of January 2007 (Tue), 19:14
umm... yes:)

is it going to be that size? dont forget that if its shrunk down to a business card size that text is going to be unreadable...

i would cut down on the info and try and make it a bit more... contemporary:)

Box Brownie
2nd of January 2007 (Tue), 20:03
Dare I suggest less is more.

If you are trying to sell yourself as professional then making the selling pitch on the card IMHO is not a good idea.

By that I mean just stick with contact & website info and then folk can find out about you and what you can offer them.

Just ask yourself who is the card intended for ~ where you say "Satisfaction is priority" well firstly that is not grammatically correct - it does not 'say' whose satisfaction, yours or the customer. And isn't it a little like saying Grade A chickens for sale, aren't they all Grade A because who would buy the Grade B ones!

Folk buy from folk, your card should be an invitation for them to call you but not stating that (sorry to state the obvious).

HTH :)

PS I do like the image you have used.

Graphyfotoz
2nd of January 2007 (Tue), 21:11
Dare I suggest less is more.

If you are trying to sell yourself as professional then making the selling pitch on the card IMHO is not a good idea.

By that I mean just stick with contact & website info and then folk can find out about you and what you can offer them.

Just ask yourself who is the card intended for ~ where you say "Satisfaction is priority" well firstly that is not grammatically correct - it does not 'say' whose satisfaction, yours or the customer. And isn't it a little like saying Grade A chickens for sale, aren't they all Grade A because who would buy the Grade B ones!

Folk buy from folk, your card should be an invitation for them to call you but not stating that (sorry to state the obvious).

HTH :)

PS I do like the image you have used.

Thanx for being straight up....that's what I want.
What you say DOES make sense!
That's why I brought this to the forum....wanna get it right in the final product.
I wanna sell...not over sell myself! :wink:

This was just a concept card so I'll get back to the drawing board.

mfreddo
2nd of January 2007 (Tue), 21:42
I can't believe no one caught the other error :p, make sure spelling is all correct. Availible should be available.

Graphyfotoz
2nd of January 2007 (Tue), 22:03
I can't believe no one caught the other error :p, make sure spelling is all correct. Availible should be available.

D'OH!! :oops:

BillP
2nd of January 2007 (Tue), 23:44
Also, it's Experience, not Experiance.

Graphyfotoz
3rd of January 2007 (Wed), 07:58
Also, it's Experience, not Experiance.



Ahhhh Pobody's Nerfect!:oops: :rolleyes:

R Hardman
3rd of January 2007 (Wed), 20:47
Ahhhh Pobody's Nerfect!:oops: :rolleyes:

No... but your clients expect it. ;)