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Graphyfotoz
2nd of January 2007 (Tue), 19:07
Is this too "busy"?
I'm open to idea's!
http://graphyfotoz.smugmug.com/photos/120598298-L.jpg
stupot
2nd of January 2007 (Tue), 19:14
umm... yes:)
is it going to be that size? dont forget that if its shrunk down to a business card size that text is going to be unreadable...
i would cut down on the info and try and make it a bit more... contemporary:)
Box Brownie
2nd of January 2007 (Tue), 20:03
Dare I suggest less is more.
If you are trying to sell yourself as professional then making the selling pitch on the card IMHO is not a good idea.
By that I mean just stick with contact & website info and then folk can find out about you and what you can offer them.
Just ask yourself who is the card intended for ~ where you say "Satisfaction is priority" well firstly that is not grammatically correct - it does not 'say' whose satisfaction, yours or the customer. And isn't it a little like saying Grade A chickens for sale, aren't they all Grade A because who would buy the Grade B ones!
Folk buy from folk, your card should be an invitation for them to call you but not stating that (sorry to state the obvious).
HTH :)
PS I do like the image you have used.
Graphyfotoz
2nd of January 2007 (Tue), 21:11
Dare I suggest less is more.
If you are trying to sell yourself as professional then making the selling pitch on the card IMHO is not a good idea.
By that I mean just stick with contact & website info and then folk can find out about you and what you can offer them.
Just ask yourself who is the card intended for ~ where you say "Satisfaction is priority" well firstly that is not grammatically correct - it does not 'say' whose satisfaction, yours or the customer. And isn't it a little like saying Grade A chickens for sale, aren't they all Grade A because who would buy the Grade B ones!
Folk buy from folk, your card should be an invitation for them to call you but not stating that (sorry to state the obvious).
HTH :)
PS I do like the image you have used.
Thanx for being straight up....that's what I want.
What you say DOES make sense!
That's why I brought this to the forum....wanna get it right in the final product.
I wanna sell...not over sell myself! :wink:
This was just a concept card so I'll get back to the drawing board.
mfreddo
2nd of January 2007 (Tue), 21:42
I can't believe no one caught the other error :p, make sure spelling is all correct. Availible should be available.
Graphyfotoz
2nd of January 2007 (Tue), 22:03
I can't believe no one caught the other error :p, make sure spelling is all correct. Availible should be available.
D'OH!! :oops:
BillP
2nd of January 2007 (Tue), 23:44
Also, it's Experience, not Experiance.
Graphyfotoz
3rd of January 2007 (Wed), 07:58
Also, it's Experience, not Experiance.
Ahhhh Pobody's Nerfect!:oops: :rolleyes:
R Hardman
3rd of January 2007 (Wed), 20:47
Ahhhh Pobody's Nerfect!:oops: :rolleyes:
No... but your clients expect it. ;)
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