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lingham
5th of January 2007 (Fri), 13:18
not sure i lilke it now though

http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/1718/graffiti1mediumit6.jpg

Miyagi-san
5th of January 2007 (Fri), 15:41
Not sure if you are looking for critique?

I think it's pretty good, if perhaps a tad flat looking. Although that comes down to personal preference....I just like contrasty shots more often than not. Just my thing though :D

I think that a dark border vs a white one would work better. Again, a personal thing :)

Some might say the composition is too long...cropped a bit too tight. I like the composition as shown though.

Overall, a good shot. B&W was a good choice.

DarioC
6th of January 2007 (Sat), 16:33
i havnt understood correctly..
is this post a photo of any graffiti or your own personal 'piece'?

i would have to agree with the comments posted above me regarding crop and border...and mainly for your next try, i would choose a better graffiti to photograph!