Getting closer to business card? CC please

[sonia dada]

It’s so hard for me to judge my own stuff. Everything I do looks "just ok" to me but not great.

http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n234/soniadada/businesscard3rgb.jpg

[PhotoScout]

It looks like she has a tiny speck on the side of her nose. It's like a stud or a hole filler. You might want to erase that. Also, I would add what specialty your photography business covers. Other than that, it looks nicely done.

[jamner]

I think it looks great, nice job.

[Ferrari 1]

I like it, but the "nose post" is a little distracting. Other than that, it has a really "fresh" look to it! Nice job.

[philsurfingpics]

I like it! I agree with removing the nose ring. GOOD JOB!!!!

[sonia dada]

Thanks. I think I’ll use this after a few minor changes. The nose stud, and I changed the font color to a lighter shade from her cheek, and added a bevel & emboss and a drop shadow. I think I’ll move "photography" up a hair, but I’m kinda worried about creating too much dead space. I could fill it with specialties or a slogan if I can think of one I like & that fits. Now I just have to do the back of the card. :confused:

[elcuartoscuro]

I like it

[Stefan A]

Card looks good, but yes, the nose ring is the first thing I saw - remove it. You also might want to have a more professional website url. When I see "myspace", I think kids. True or not, that is the impression I get.

Stefan

[rowdyred94]

I really like your design, but I wouldn't call it "dead space". In fact, I might cluster the text to the bottom to create some space to her left. Also, there's no need for the "http://" in your web address. No modern browser requires them and it looks junky. Better yet, get a proper web domain. Myspace certainly doesn't look like you're committed to your work.

[sonia dada]

I really like what you did there, thanks.
I kinda maxed out the credit card buying lights so I can’t get a website right now. Cards will even be hard to do at this point. Maybe go without any url for this run?

[Mike Reynolds]

url's are cheep

[roman_t]

i like it very much. you can take more space with her face. use readable and similar in style fonts.

[JHH Photgraphy]

The card looks alot better without the post in her nose.

[Shutter22]

At least have a flickr or smugmug.
It seems a lot better than myspace.

[mtnbiker1096]

I'll be the odd one out here, but I personally like nose rings / studs.But again thats just me.
I think all your cards are great.

[hijinks]

I like the shot much better without the stud in her nose.

[techboy]

I agree with other's comment on the URL, likewise, the typeface has to go as well. You have a clean image sharing space with a whimsical font. Neither communicates professionalism.