quick opinion please :)

[islandphoto]

This may or may not go into a frame with as a 4x6 in a mat that holds several other photos of the same couple (For a wedding expo). What do you guys think?

[islandphoto]

I should specify... sorry. The mat is 20x24 I think. There's a slot for an 8x10 2 5x7s and 6 4x6s.

[tim]

Too dark, not dramatic enough. Use shadows/highlights, also add vignette, maybe saturation.