picture of my sister.

[j2photography]

here's a picture of my sister. C&C is needed :) it was shot with my 50mm lens @ an f/2.8 .

http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r181/gsrxcivic/portraits/psd.jpg

thanks guys!

[TXLEBER]

She looks out of focus. I think I'd like it cropped more on the left side.

[Steiglitz]

She's out of focus...how old is she...she seems too young for a tat.

[Phocus73]

I like the concept and idea of this shot. However as it was already said, the lack of sharpness is distracting. I find also that since she seems to be leaning towards the right side of the picture, it takes my attention off of the central subject which is your sister. If you did crop it as was suggested I think that would help. Other then that, I do like the shot. Thanks for sharing.

[j2photography]

thanks for the c&c guys :) she's actually 19. lol. and yeah i was shooting with my 50mm. im still not too used to it yet, so it may have been out of focus cuz i was probably moving.

:) keep em coming guys

[Marty_Oz]

I like the subject and composition.
Like stated it is a bit soft, you just need to sharpen slightly.
I did a quick fix in Photoshop and you can easily improve the image.
Great shot though, shoot some more and post them.
Marty