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mwinog2777
8th of March 2004 (Mon), 01:21
Opinions?

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msol
8th of March 2004 (Mon), 06:55
Wow...
I love the high blue-yellow contrast. Is this the original, or did you change colors in Photoshop?

From a composition point-of-view... I would try to crop a little from the right (remove some of the blue) and from the bottom (remove the bottom-right flower piece). Would that be an improvement?
martcol
8th of March 2004 (Mon), 08:47
Nice shot, great detail, lovely colour, good depth of field. Cropping would help here I think, especially to reduce the large area of blue. I think I would have a go here at moving away from the traditional rectangle... Whatever takes your fancy.

Thanks for posting

Martin
mwinog2777
8th of March 2004 (Mon), 11:15
The blue is PS effect.

Took above advice:
http://members.cox.net/mwinog2777/flowerprint.jpg
martcol
8th of March 2004 (Mon), 12:32
Your not gonna thank me for this, but how about cropping the right side and the bottom. This will move the flower head to the right more and keep that spikey thing moving away to the left corner. At the end of the day, you will decide the strongest composition but... I think another try might help!

Thanks for posting

Martin