Geoffery's Random Coffetable...

[Geoffery]

These are extract of a sample coffetable that I am currently making.
#1.
http://geofferyloh.smugmug.com/photos/126843872-O.jpg
#2.
http://geofferyloh.smugmug.com/photos/126843877-O.jpg

[Grace]

beautiful pictures! I would love to see more! the only thing I don't particularly like is the heavy vignette, but that's purely personal. She looks like a beautiful bride and her flowers are gorgeous!

Welcome!

[Actionphotog]

Very well done hope you sell a bunch of them

[CyberPet]

Beautiful! Although the vignettes and the black background makes the images much darker than they really are. How would a white keyline look like?

[Phil V]

Beautiful! .... How would a white keyline look like?
me too

[tim]

My thoughts:
- Way too much vignette - it's obscuring the face in the top left image. Try this (http://photography-on-the.net/forum/showpost.php?p=2098742&postcount=147).
- I don't like the repeated image in B&W then color.
- In general my album design style is KISS - Keep It Simple, Stupid. Symmetry is important. Don't try and go too fancy on your first album. Try not to let the layout distract from the images.
- If people are looking to the left or the right, position the image so they look into the middle of the book, rather than towards the outside. Not a rule, and can be broken, just a guideline I use.