With Compliments

[BoeingBonkers]

Well I am having a play around designing stationary, FUN! Obvoiusly these are just ideas i'm only 18 so dont want to rush into anything yet... What do you think of this, simple and clean. What do you think of the lens to me it looks a little strange, should I use the whole lens or stick to that half?

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y67/Boeing777/WithCompliments21.jpg

[Bobster]

make it into just vector lines, no raster graphics..

the Matthew Moore and Photography look akwardly placed as does the rest of the text tbh.. only way you'd get away with centered text on the right, was if it was inside a box.. break you phone numbers up to make them easier to read 0121 706 43 45 and 07830 269 329

i like the way you've kept it to a simple type rather than going all out and using 300,000 different styles of type on the same thing..

the bottom of the slip isn't balanced with the top..

you've also given the right hand side less gutter than the left, this also gives the feeling of unblance..

having a Blueyonder e-mail address doesn't do much either..

my Comp Slip
http://www.pbase.com/bob_hall/image/74005438.jpg

[Gary_Evans]

I prefer Matthews.

Just the thoughts of someone who doesnt use comp slips :confused: