Friends of mine.

[Tito948]

http://home.nyc.rr.com/thebrooklynyard/mack_lacey.jpg
Mack Lacey

http://home.nyc.rr.com/thebrooklynyard/cisco_soto.jpg
Cisco Soto

I edited and added another picture for critique. Instead of opening another thread I did it this way. Hope no one minds.
Critique away people!!!

Shot in "AV" mode.

Tito

[Riccardo]

I like it very much, but my opinion is that could be better without cutting the hair on the right.

Ciao
Riccardo

[clos]

Lighting is nice and soft, technically well done but...more dramatic harsher light might have been more appropriate IMHO.

Also, try ironing the white sheet before the shoot or use a more natural backround.

-Clos

[Tito948]

I like it very much, but my opinion is that could be better without cutting the hair on the right.

Ciao
Riccardo

Thank you Riccardo, out of the couple of pictures I took of him this was the best one to post here for critique even tho it was cut.

Lighting is nice and soft, technically well done but...more dramatic harsher light might have been more appropriate IMHO.

Also, try ironing the white sheet before the shoot or use a more natural backround.

-Clos

Thank you Clos, I'll try your suggestion about the lighting. Also, the background was a wall and not a sheet.
Not the best looking wall but a wall(I laughed when I read your post). I will not be using that wall to shoot again.

Thanks,
Tito

[PhotosGuy]

Nice character studies.
My instinct is to crop about 10-15% off the top of the first one, but I wouldn't insist on it.