some more fromthe studio. feedback please.

[dR_MoSEs]

heres some more from the studio yesterday with stav and sasja

1 - a sort of terminator/matrix pic. purely a mistake then a few tweaks got it good.

http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j30/dR_MoSEs/new%20stuff/stav-glasses2.jpg

2

http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j30/dR_MoSEs/new%20stuff/stav-half-glasses.jpg

3

http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j30/dR_MoSEs/new%20stuff/stav-half-glasses2.jpg

4

http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j30/dR_MoSEs/new%20stuff/sasja-hat2.jpg

5

http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j30/dR_MoSEs/new%20stuff/sasja-under-chair.jpg

6 - and this is what i call the year 4 smile. hehe

http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j30/dR_MoSEs/new%20stuff/sasja-year4.jpg


please can i have some comments and critique on how to improve and what you think.

cheers guys.

joe.

[Beau Hudspeth]

I like the last two, but all the others are a bit fuzzy - slightly out of focus.

Also, on the last shot, there are visible splotches caused from dirt, dust or spots on the lens. They are most obvious on the upper right and extreme upper left.

Good attempts! Keep it up!

[dR_MoSEs]

the first werent actually out of focus. i added blur to them bit just a little too much.

[Eyelikedurt]

just have to mention the focussing. If it's deliberate fair enough, but in portraiture uch as this i should imagine that youd want them a tad sharper.

Keep hammering away at the poses, its good to see some variety!

[Redfish]

I echo the comments above, but ithey may be slightly underexposed because you are losing some detail in the hair

Good shots - keep posting