Second time in a studio!

[neodite]

Hey guys and girls!

First post, wahoooo!

I'm still new here and I'm still learning a lot about photography! I had the pleasure of working with a model to produce some editorial/fashion type shots yesterday. This was my second time using studio lighting so im still very much a newb :oops:

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h259/neodite/Model%20Pics/EmmaDukes/03.jpg

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h259/neodite/Model%20Pics/EmmaDukes/02.jpg

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h259/neodite/Model%20Pics/EmmaDukes/04.jpg

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h259/neodite/Model%20Pics/EmmaDukes/01.jpg

Hope you like them!
Dave

[Linkzi]

I'm not a pro, but they look pro to me. Your model screams fashion!

[hawk911]

more fashion than a portrait for me. I don't like that I can't see her eyes.

[neodite]

yea it wasnt ment to be a portrait, as i said in the first post, there ment to be fashion/editorial shots.

[Shutter22]

You could have fooled me that this was only your second time in a studio. These are absolutely fantastic. I really can't pick a favorite because they're all so wonderful.

Absolutely wonderful.

[Rumrunner]

These are very nice. I esp. like the last 2 shots.

[valja]

Great job! #3 is my favorite.

[queenbee288]

I love the colors in #3 but they all seem a little dark to me.

[krazziecliff]

These r fantastic. I cud care less abt the eyes...its got fashion written all over it! Awesome job for ue second shoot with studio lights. Mind sharing ur technique n equipment?

[TSEE]

I think the pses and such are great esp if this is only your second try at it, with that said I agrre with Char, they appear a bit dark. Fix that and they'll be topnotch!

[::Lisa::]

I think the pses and such are great esp if this is only your second try at it, with that said I agrre with Char, they appear a bit dark. Fix that and they'll be topnotch!I agree, awesome.

[CDBlue]

Very nice images, and great model, but the images are a little flat. They look like they need some levels/curves adjustments to make the colours pop more.

[gemini6474]

i like them all but i like the last one the best, good job.

[Lunajen]

I like the first one for the flatness....the lighting should look that way for that particular shot. Almost a sixties retro look. She would have looked a little Twiggyish if she had blond hair. The others ha a slight eighties feel to them and if your model had been wearing a shinnier lip gloss that would had made the picture. Your eyes ar drawn to her lips and that would have made a great nod to the eighties photography then....
I think the fourth one could use a a little levels adjustment.
Other than that they are top notch sir.