Casual portraiture with Rebel

[roanjohn]

Also posted on the Shared Photo section (if you've seen it twice:-)) Just want to hear some critiques.

http://www.pbase.com/image/27269339.jpg

Thanks for any suggestions.

Ro1

[Meerkat17]

I like the image and the lighting - what I find distracting is the woman in the background - her tonal values are the same as the model in the foreground and her left shoulder is brighter - this catches my eye and forces me to look away from the main subject.

A little darkening of the background might help.

David