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DirtyJerzey
26th of February 2007 (Mon), 18:53
Hey im new to this website and new to photography. Just got my Canon in the begining of December, and looking to become a Professional photographer. So im just throwing some shots out there, tell me what you think about them. Good/Bad? Would like to know how i could make my pictures look/come out better.
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t89/VeloceLyfe_/IMG_4447editresizecopy.png
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t89/VeloceLyfe_/IMG_4449editcopy.png

http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t89/VeloceLyfe_/IMG_4579editpng.png

http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t89/VeloceLyfe_/IMG_4536edit.png

twalker294
26th of February 2007 (Mon), 19:20
First of all I love the processing on these. In the first pic, the car is a little too close to the bottom and right edges of the frame. Give it a bit more room next time. In the second, the car is moving out of the frame instead of into it. Always move into the frame. The third is good but a bit too centered for my liking. The fourth doesn't do anything for me (except that the RS4 is a sweet ride ;-)

Sorry if I sound critical -- the shots are very good technically. Just work on your composition a bit.

crayfish13
26th of February 2007 (Mon), 19:23
Sick car and like the pics

DirtyJerzey
26th of February 2007 (Mon), 19:27
thanks im looking for alot of pointers, cause the only people that tell me it works good our my parents(which only know what looks "COOL") im looking for pointers from actual people on forums/photographers/ anyone that knows their stuff. Thanks ill try to post as much as possible to learn more. Ive been taking pictures like crazy this past month and so on

unafaxer
26th of February 2007 (Mon), 19:33
Those photos bring a tear to my eye....I had a silver 2000 S4....really loved that car...however, I had one too many wrecks with it.:(

Now I drive a pickup.:confused:

Funny how life is sometimes. Nice Shots.

PhotosGuy
27th of February 2007 (Tue), 07:48
It's a good 1st effort. I'd turn the front wheels a bit to the right in the 1st one. Seen this?
A few Car Lighting Tips (http://photography-on-the.net/forum/showthread.php?t=70290)

And...


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/PhotosGuy/Forum%20Junk/Welcome-ChargerRT_020.gif

DirtyJerzey
27th of February 2007 (Tue), 08:08
Hey Photoguy thanks for the greeting and the great lighting tips

PhotosGuy
27th of February 2007 (Tue), 08:20
Have fun, & stay out of dark garages! :D

lankaman
28th of February 2007 (Wed), 15:55
First of all I love the processing on these. In the first pic, the car is a little too close to the bottom and right edges of the frame. Give it a bit more room next time. In the second, the car is moving out of the frame instead of into it. Always move into the frame. The third is good but a bit too centered for my liking. The fourth doesn't do anything for me (except that the RS4 is a sweet ride ;-)

Sorry if I sound critical -- the shots are very good technically. Just work on your composition a bit.

These are very helpful comments. I am new and these tips help to improve my pictures. soon I will post my first picture.
Thanks twalker.

NorCalAl
28th of February 2007 (Wed), 17:03
Man, the only thing that would make them better is if they were of my RS4. OK, so I don't HAVE an RS4, but I mean, if I had one and those were pics of mine.
I miss my TT...

ajbalazic
2nd of March 2007 (Fri), 14:57
I like the pano. Great idea leaving it running so you get some exhaust showing in the shot.