Latest Swimsuit Model

[clos]

Color or B&W?

http://ompi.onemodelplace.com/OMP_Images/Photographer/52286/52286_p_8CAC9E64-07BE-D296-F0930C635E2676AC.jpg

http://ompi.onemodelplace.com/OMP_Images/Photographer/52286/52286_p_8B486A86-ED3F-2686-AB4DC60B1C4391BD.jpg

I have another shoot with another model in the same location today so any further comments, suggestion, critiques, and constructive insults are welcome.

Thanks!

-Clos

[CyberDyneSystems]

I like the colors in this photo.. as they are working well together,. the blue sky in the background is not washed out.. and compliments the swimsuit.. and her skin tones and hair are all pleasing.

[JZaun]

I agree with CDS on this one,,, Color looks best!

JZaun

[manncer]

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I like the color too. :shock:

Is she squinting at all from the light on her face?

manncer

[gsmx2]

I don't think her hands and knee are adding anything to this photo.

Then since you are asking...would it be better to move her head away from the wood so it is surrounded by sky and the shadow doesn't fall on the wood?

Just two thoughts.

gsm x2

[Shabookie]

I like the BW..... I think the shadow from her head fits well, so I wouldnt remove the fence. I agree with the hand and knee... I would crop a little off the left side of the pic because her suit is pinching her back and creating a buldge. Maybe because she is slumped over?

[clos]

Cyberdyne,

Thanks.

JZaun,

I agree I like the color best too.

Manncer,

This was her first time, I thought she did great.

Gsmx2,

No her knees and hands don't add anything to the photo but her cleavage certainly does and I couldn't crop one without the other I think. I don't mind the shadow so much in this case it grounds her a bit IMHO. I would be curious to here what others think though.

Shabookie,

You weren't supposed to notice the bulge LOL. I spotted it after I finished processing and oh well. I think it can easily be cropped and will get around to it eventually. Good catch. Thanks!

More comments and critiques as always are most welcome.

-Clos

[Volatile]

I like the B&W one better. I think it draws more attention to the model's good qualities, ie, unblemished skin, attractive face, etc.

Good luck with the next shoot.