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SHULTSIE!!!
4th of March 2007 (Sun), 04:39
I took this last night... Something about it is not sitting well with it... can someone help with the editing?

18mm @ f/18, 5sec

http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d179/piflyboy/TowerBridge0057.jpg

baw5t0n
4th of March 2007 (Sun), 04:46
seems to need more contrast... the subject(s) need to pop out more... but nicely framed...

SHULTSIE!!!
4th of March 2007 (Sun), 04:53
I also have this in the set, but I'm not sure what to think about the blur...

37mm @ f/10, 30 sec

http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d179/piflyboy/TowerBridge0058.jpg

Ukuleleman
5th of March 2007 (Mon), 07:55
There is a lot of sky and a lot of water, might I suggest that you try cropping to bring out either the boats or the buildings, it depends on the quality how much you can enlarge them with losing detail or pixilating. I say this although I think you would want the moon in the shot, but it is so high in the sky it seems it would defeat the idea of a good crop.

rammy
5th of March 2007 (Mon), 16:08
Hi,

Nice idea. I like the view, just a little needed in composition IMHO. I think there is a bit of redundancy on the left and right sides and a vertical portrait shot may have focused the attention? The moon and reflection is a little too bright also, if shot in RAW then a couple of masked layers to tone these down would be great. Personally would have gone for a portrait type of shot and would tried to have the boat beneath the Canary Warf buildings in the background and the moon overhead by moving to the right.

Well done with the exposure on this one, came out well.