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Meerkat17
29th of March 2004 (Mon), 08:15
Wood anemone.
Should I crop this differently?
Is the flower too central?
Your critique and comments welcomed.

http://www.btinternet.com/~David.Lewins/g5/images/flower0015.jpg

Regards
David

Scottes
29th of March 2004 (Mon), 08:23
Do you have any more image at the top? Reducing the dark lower-right corner would help a bit, and get the flower more off-center.

I feel this works though.

ryuwulf
29th of March 2004 (Mon), 09:41
i like it. Less is more in this example

flower is off center, not exactly the rule of thirds but great.

i do feel the white flower needs to be whiter.

This could be a magazine pic.

nice!!!

Calis
29th of March 2004 (Mon), 10:23
The bottom right hand petal is slightly blown - but that's beeing really picky :-)

Other than that the flower could be slightly lower in the frame, so more of the background is out of focus

Lovely picture no the less.

Meerkat17
29th of March 2004 (Mon), 12:16
Thanks guys,
I'm afraid its going to have to be the bottom edge that's cropped as there is no more top - I originally (slightly) cropped both bottom and right side for the image you see.

As for the slightly blown petal I've looked at the hi-res image and I can just see the veins on the petal, so it must have lost when I converted for the web.

Thanks again for your imput

Cheers
David