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eve
29th of March 2004 (Mon), 15:02
http://www.clanh2k.com/evie/justin_chair.jpg

i would really like criticism/advice...
I have more of my picture on my website

shelbix2020
29th of March 2004 (Mon), 23:12
I wouldnt really change anything except maybe show more of his face .... lol I like the "NO!" written on the chair

timmyquest
29th of March 2004 (Mon), 23:41
I like it too, the color/noise works good here.

shniks
30th of March 2004 (Tue), 21:46
Theres something I really like about this. It has something special about it that makes it interesting.

martcol
31st of March 2004 (Wed), 07:34
I really like this shot. There is something in the composure that gives it a slight unease or even menace. You created a slightly off-balance perspective that kept me looking for a while and changing my view of either someone on their back or upright (if you know what I mean)...

I am not so keen on the white band of the chair back or the "NO!" However, it isn't clear whether it would improve it or not if it wasn't there.

Thanks for posting

Martin

ryuwulf
31st of March 2004 (Wed), 11:03
i like the grain, and the awkward angle. Very kewl!! very Punk!!!

bravo!!!!

Idoc
31st of March 2004 (Wed), 17:13
A really great shot, nice angle, but I have to disagree on the grain. I know it gives it a look but if it had some post processing with sharp in some spots and grainy/ out of focus in others it would still hold some of those same qualites (punky, grungy).

Absolutely great compostion, you have gift.

eve
5th of April 2004 (Mon), 17:19
thanks yall...i really appreciate the compliments