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i2iSTUDIOS
10th of March 2007 (Sat), 22:30
1.
http://www.i2istudios.com/images/wc/02.jpg
1a.
http://www.i2istudios.com/images/wc/02a.jpg
2.
http://www.i2istudios.com/images/wc/01.jpg
3.
http://www.i2istudios.com/images/wc/03.jpg
Kelsey-Lee
10th of March 2007 (Sat), 22:36
I don't like it... Sorry, but I have to be honest.
rowdyred94
10th of March 2007 (Sat), 23:23
I don't like it... Sorry, but I have to be honest.
That's really not helpful. http://goingmanual.com/photo/tutorials.php?tutid=73#critique

In both shots there are areas that could use more lighting. In the first, it's the hair. In the second, the hard hand shadow is distracting. Not bad aside from that.
i2iSTUDIOS
11th of March 2007 (Sun), 07:28
That's really not helpful. http://goingmanual.com/photo/tutorials.php?tutid=73#critique

In both shots there are areas that could use more lighting. In the first, it's the hair. In the second, the hard hand shadow is distracting. Not bad aside from that.
thanks, I looked back at the raw file and lessended the shadow cut on the 1st image. :)
bullet33912
11th of March 2007 (Sun), 10:02
I agree with rowdyred. A little more lighting is needed.

In particular, the hair is what is my biggest concern. I hate it when the hair disappears on a subject.

Otherwise, you did OK!
Scott_Quier
12th of March 2007 (Mon), 19:20
Aside from the lens flare the last on, I kinda like the look here. Just get that hair light of the frame and I think this would work much better.
DeluxeMan
12th of March 2007 (Mon), 23:02
I like the #1 the most.

#2 and 3 : the make-up look washed out. For me, it's Kinda bad for this type of photo. She have beautiful eyes, you should use more this advantage on your next shooting.

Keep up the good work.

- Lens flair should be banish in every software. Specially when you have a client in your back!
DeluxeMan
12th of March 2007 (Mon), 23:22
... and the "matches" Photo on your web site is amazing!
tazrebel
12th of March 2007 (Mon), 23:25
good feedback on the light. I like the concepts of the photos. number 3 is my favorite. i think it might benefit from some shadow adjustment from the left. shadows work well but make sure you dont have a part of the face too dark. keep it up!
coreypolis
12th of March 2007 (Mon), 23:26
well considering what camera they came from, I guess there ok ;)