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rayjb6
11th of March 2007 (Sun), 23:06
I'd like some feedback on this picture, general opinions, as well as what can be improved. Still working on my technique.

CannedHeat
11th of March 2007 (Sun), 23:43
I like the composition. It actually does a good job of telling a story. I can see just a hint of straighted light which is nice. But the blown highlights are a distraction to me. /Dan

tazrebel
11th of March 2007 (Sun), 23:47
I think you did a good job on the composition. The lighting is a little harsh and as an option you could maybe enhance the shadowing to create more of a silhouette(SP). Overall it looks like you have a good eye.

timbernet
12th of March 2007 (Mon), 00:42
I like the shot, but like CannedHeat and tazrebel said - the lighting is a bit harsh. I did a crop on the monitor with my hands, that eliminated the left most sunlight - your profile doesn't say IMAGE EDITING OK, but if you are interested I can show you want I am talking about.

rayjb6
12th of March 2007 (Mon), 06:39
Please do, I am interested in any input. Thanks for the replies!

rayjb6
13th of March 2007 (Tue), 00:16
How's this for a second edit? Improvement?

tazrebel
13th of March 2007 (Tue), 00:22
im my opinion, much improved! i like it!

dmoney30
13th of March 2007 (Tue), 00:23
much better edit imo..great shot!

timbernet
13th of March 2007 (Tue), 00:29
Heh - that is the crop I was going to do - Good job! I like it a lot more!