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OviV
3rd of April 2004 (Sat), 20:28
What do you guys think? Not quite pleased with it for some reason. How could I improve similar shots in the future?

http://www.shareapicture.com/vsalbum/getpic.aspx?fld=\OviV\Photography\Nature\Everglade s\Landscapes&pic=131_3181.jpg&OV=0

Thanks,
Ovi

boomer1959
3rd of April 2004 (Sat), 23:38
:D Nice colors, I like it.

gsmx2
3rd of April 2004 (Sat), 23:40
I looked at this for a good long time. I see nothing wrong with it. In fact, I see a lot of RIGHT with it. Even composition. Light on the leaves. Good water. Fair sky.

I think it's good.

gsm x2

Meerkat17
4th of April 2004 (Sun), 04:09
WOW great shot it takes your eye right into the picture then you start to notice the colour of the leaves etc.

Don't change it

David

OviV
4th of April 2004 (Sun), 15:15
Thanks for the kind comments. I guess the thing I dislike the most about it is the lack of color at the top of the sky. Not sure I could have done about it though since that's what it was.

Again, thank you,
Ovi

Jewel
13th of April 2004 (Tue), 11:40
Wow is all I can say. If you are not in the professional photography business, then you are in the wrong business. You have a gift!

Jewel

ryuwulf
13th of April 2004 (Tue), 15:11
great shot. the colors are beautiful.

Bravo!!! i like how the trail of light, leads the eye.

once again great shot

ryuwulf
13th of April 2004 (Tue), 15:11
great shot. the colors are beautiful.

Bravo!!! i like how the trail of light, leads the eye.

once again great shot

OviV
17th of April 2004 (Sat), 14:46
Thanks Jewel,

I am far from a pro. I just get lucky sometimes. :)

IPATH
17th of April 2004 (Sat), 17:12
What is there to say about this pic that hasnt been said already?
Truly an awe inspiring picture :o

CyberDyneSystems
17th of April 2004 (Sat), 19:25
This is really nice! :)

But..... since we are in the "critiquue" forum... :wink:

The pink looks pushed a bit too far... as does the contrast, which contributes to the biggest problem I can see,. that being,.. the shadow areas seem too dark.

If you are looking to improve on the image,. i think you may be able to try a multiexposure on different layers trick.. to try and bring out some of the sahowy areas in the foliage.

Really a wonderfull shot with a lot going for it 8)