Almost monochrome

[msol]

Hi,

I would like to hear your opinion on these two shots, taken today. When I took them, I thought there was more yellow of the flowers. But the end result hardly shows any yellow. Although it is not what I expected, I still liked them enough to ask you for your feedback. So, what do you think? Color, composition, ...?

http://images.fotopic.net/?id=3628320&outx=760&oq=0

http://images.fotopic.net/?id=3628321&outx=760&oq=0

[Meerkat17]

I like the second one but I'm not sure about the topary to the left edge of the picture - I don't think it adds anything and if it was removed I feel that the image would be stronger. I'm probably completely wrong but that's what I'd try. However I like the image you have all the same and like how the eye follows the maze effect into where the flowers are.

Again Great work

David

[msol]

Thanks David,
Could you please help me (since I am not a native English speaker)... what is a topary? I can't find anything to the left edge of the picture that could be this topary. Sorry... :oops:

[Meerkat17]

Topary is the art of shaping trees - the two in you photo are shaped to a cone style and will always be trimmed and shaped that way.

David