Leslie

[lacerado]

She's a friend of mine that just wanted a new photo for a profile on some website. I am by no means a portrait photographer. For this one, all I did was park her on my bed and point a speedlight at a reflector. What do you think of the pp?

[coreypolis]

well since no one else has commented, heres a bit of c&c

the color cast doesn't add anything to the image and doesn't match her expression.

the belly button is a bit distracting, cutting off the feet is a bit akward, her arm is a bit brighter than the face which detracts a bit, no detail in the hair at all

[butcha27]

Agree with the previous comments, not a bad effort though and it has potential