View Full Version : The kiss
ACDCROCKS
18th of March 2007 (Sun), 20:06
Took this at a wedding. Canon 20d with 70-200mm IS. All comments welcomed
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g146/The_CAMERA_KID/40005-Copy.jpg
jessiper
18th of March 2007 (Sun), 21:16
The B&W conversion is a little muddy, and their faces are dark. She looks cute, but he looks awkward.
picturecrazy
18th of March 2007 (Sun), 21:48
The selective colour just ain't doing it for me. The flowers are hardly a feature of the shot at all (it should be the couple sharing the moment) so flowers would not be a good choice for selective colouring in my opinion. It appears that you've even focused on the flowers instead of the people. Aside the fact that the couple are very centrally composed, the tablecloth and backdrop don't really contribute much to the story of the moment so a landscape orientation in a tighter crop might have been a nicer idea. Sorry, I wish I had something more positive to say.
sblais
19th of March 2007 (Mon), 09:32
One question: why did you put the Smirnoff Ice in color?? I'm not really a big fan of selective coloring except in some rare occasion and this, unfortunately, is not one of them. I would have preferred a horizontal cropping for this shot.
takeyourpic
19th of March 2007 (Mon), 11:18
I wondered if this was an ad for Smirnoff Ice....but anyways...I agree with the others that this is not one of the "hand painted" shots that are going to bring you a rave. I think the B/W version with a horizontal crop would have been a better comp on this one without the color addition.
lippy113
19th of March 2007 (Mon), 18:33
for b/w conversions use these settings in photoshop go to image/adjustments/channel mixer tick the monochrome box then select +70 for red +20 for green +10 for blue and click ok let me know what ya think
lippy113
19th of March 2007 (Mon), 18:43
just thought i would show you the picture cleaned up there was too much noise in the picture yes it did look muddy hope ya dont mind
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