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[Shabookie]

I just was out in the garage today thinking what can I blast some photos of, when I came across this beautiful machine; my motorcycle.

Please Critique.
http://www.pbase.com/image/27718645/original.jpg
http://www.pbase.com/image/27720519/original.jpg

Thanks,
Shabookie

[Idoc]

I really like the first shot!

It has some great lines within it, the composition is right on, it's near a perfect shot. Dont know why no one else commented :? :? Go figure.

[garethhhhh]

It just doesn't say "Motorcycle" to me.
I looked at the pictures first & wasn't too sure what it was.

just my 2 cents :wink:

[Idoc]

I dont really think it represents the motorcycle or is supposed to make you think of one unless you know the company name, it is just an abstract type macro shot.

[FocalSpeed]

I disagree with the last 2 comments...

I love the 1st shot... You can tell it is a motorcycle by the gas cap... Wonderful shot IMO.

I find that the instrument cluster on the 2nd picture is disctracting, a little crop from the top and the bottom would do wonders to that 2nd picture.

Keep it up!