Written Word

[Idoc]

Comments Please :D

http://images.fotopic.net/?id=3684720&outx=600&noresize=1&nostamp=1

And if you can be brutal/very honest I have been trying to improve my photography and found real blunt criticism can be some of the best help for me in doing this.

[Meerkat17]

I really like the subject and the treatment but feel that some angles in the composition might have made it a stronger.

Other than that I really like the crumpled pages and the fine blots of ink on the papers at the right

Nice image

David

[manncer]

:o :o :oops: 8)

I like the composition. I'd like to see the bright area to the left toned down a bit, but that's just MHO

manncer

[Idoc]

Meerkat17: Your comments are much appreciated, the compostion does need some improvements but overall I was so pleased by the end result. :D

Manncer: I can see exactly what you mean about the bright area and didn't notice it before. Thanks for pointing it out. I'll get it corrected and reposted on my gallery site later today. :D

:mrgreen: Thank you so very much for your feedback :mrgreen: