Scootering/Death Photo

[DerekPb]

I found an abandon house and wanted to try to create my own death scence.
C&C please

http://i67.photobucket.com/albums/h302/GrandmasAssassins/myspacedeath.jpg

walking around and saw a kid scootering and asked him if i can shoot.
C&Cplease

http://i67.photobucket.com/albums/h302/GrandmasAssassins/tyscoot2.jpg
http://i67.photobucket.com/albums/h302/GrandmasAssassins/tyscoot.jpg

[purelithium]

the first shot is VERY dark, I know you were going for that effect, but just a little more detail would have been nice... Can't quite tell where your arm ends and the darkness begins... kind of cool, but I still would have liked to see it stand out a bit more.

[DerekPb]

the first shot is VERY dark, I know you were going for that effect, but just a little more detail would have been nice... Can't quite tell where your arm ends and the darkness begins... kind of cool, but I still would have liked to see it stand out a bit more.
http://i67.photobucket.com/albums/h302/GrandmasAssassins/anotherdeath.jpg

[Denny G]

Try to lighted the first shot (maybe contrast).

DG

[purelithium]

Nice, I love the sign on the thing you're leaning on "Consumer Warranty Enclosed, DO NOT DESTROY" haha Looks pretty destroyed to me ;)

Good job on the brightening, brings out some small details that weren't there before.

[DerekPb]

thanks.

[deadpass]

nothing about the first shot really says death to me, more like passed out. If you had a needle sticking out of his arm then i could possibly believe it was a heroin overdose or something. The position of the body just isn't natural looking for someone that's dead.

[DerekPb]

yea i guess what your saying. i set it up on a tri-pod. and had to place a motor on my head before it took the picture. i want to add blood in photoshop but im not quite sure how to.

and btw i love your pictures of Don the Vampire