Photos of my daughter

[buttercup]

Hi All,

I am still very new at photography. I have just finished my course. Please could you tell me what you all think of these photos I took I want the truth. And what I could of done to make them better.

Thanks

[imanyabob]

what a cutie!! I love #2 :)

[inthedeck]

Number two is really good...though could be darkened maybe a 1/3 of a stop. The first one, though, is very nice as well...but the color in the hat creates a weird dilineation of the shadows between it, and her forehead. If the hat was not in color, the fade of the shadow would be a lot better, since the fill flash is a bit harsh on one side, and the sun is bright on the other.

I like them...though, and would love to see some color versions...the eyes look like they have some nice color...(even though this presentation is B&W).

Please feel free to comment on one of mine, if/when you have a chance. My Dad. (http://www.photography-on-the.net/forum/showthread.php?t=300413)

[gooble]

Agree with inthedeck about #2

[embdaw]

I really like the composition of the shots...but I dont quite care for the colors...other than that, i think they are great!

[lmelendez]

I like them both, I wonder how they looked like in color :)

Nice job!

[1rushfan]

My only C&C is the crop is slightly off in #2. Other than that, great captures for someone so new! Your class taught you well!