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EOS20DAUS
17th of April 2007 (Tue), 00:37
Hey all,

Took a few pics at the local skateboarding event on the weekend


http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u159/redauxr6ii/IMG_5351.jpg

http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u159/redauxr6ii/IMG_5518.jpg

http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u159/redauxr6ii/IMG_5716.jpg
Big WIll
17th of April 2007 (Tue), 15:42
First one the front of the rider and bike look OOF, may be just my screen. It could do with being a tad lighter where the shadow is.
Lost an arm and a leg! Would prefer if these had their other limbs showing!
dirt lover
17th of April 2007 (Tue), 19:39
Some constrictive criticism:

In the first one, the rider is a little dark. I suggest a flash or different angle, so he's illuminated by the sun.

The second one is good, but it's a bit early. I think it would have been better a second or two later.

I like the third one the best, but his arm is cut off. It would have been much better if there was some space between him and the right side of the frame (and his arm wasn't cutoff).