Deep Purple @ NEC, Birmingham, UK Part 2 - NOTE! Not mine. C&C Wanted [Archive]

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shesgotthepic

4th of May 2007 (Fri), 20:21

Here is 9 - 13

Again - thank you in advance for any C&C - good or bad.

9
http://www.shesgotthepic.com/he/13.jpg

10
http://www.shesgotthepic.com/he/14.jpg

11
http://www.shesgotthepic.com/he/15.jpg

12
http://www.shesgotthepic.com/he/16.jpg

13
http://www.shesgotthepic.com/he/17.jpg

bestfromnw

5th of May 2007 (Sat), 01:43

number nine is great, lightning and wb seems to be perfect! good job

shesgotthepic

5th of May 2007 (Sat), 06:30

Thank you.

More comments from others would be greatly appreciated.

René Damkot

5th of May 2007 (Sat), 08:20

#9 and 11 are nice.
However: Get the subject out of the center!! (Yes, I'm screaming ;))

shesgotthepic

5th of May 2007 (Sat), 09:46

#9 and 11 are nice.
However: Get the subject out of the center!! (Yes, I'm screaming ;))
I know. I've been screaming the same thing.

;-)

johnstoy

5th of May 2007 (Sat), 10:57

9, 11, & 13, for me... love the lights, subject, and the action...

shesgotthepic

5th of May 2007 (Sat), 11:20

I thank you, guys.

Could you all please point out the negative as well? It is needed as the person who took these needs to learn. I want him/her to "hear" from the pro's.

Cheers

johnstoy

5th of May 2007 (Sat), 11:53

I would go vertical on some of these and trim the left side in 10, and 11... actually each photo could lose some open space all around... this will bring the performer up closer...

I realize the lights look great, but I'd try a few different versions trimming some of them out, while enlarging the performer... (I always do it to my pics...and usually the photos have enough detail to be enlarged and trimmed further...)