View Full Version : Be picky, tell me what you hate...
Shutter22
11th of May 2007 (Fri), 07:31
Please, tear it apart. I need a good critique pretty badly.
http://ic3.deviantart.com/fs16/f/2007/131/d/1/Silk_by_TheJusticeLeague.jpg
Yeoer
11th of May 2007 (Fri), 08:21
You asked...
Milk in a wine glass? dosn't quite work for me.
IMO maybe a bit more of the glass showing with a rich red wine and a bit faster shutter speed would also help.
The glass looks tobe leaning in a bit.
The lighting looks good, and i like the idea of the off centre composition just needs a little refining.
mudkips
11th of May 2007 (Fri), 08:30
Uncomfortably close to the right edge, too much dead space.
I would have preferred a cleaner looking glass, i.e. no milk on the closest wall of the glass.
I'd like to see more of the glass too.
Monkeymicra
11th of May 2007 (Fri), 08:34
I agree with mudkips, have the first splash (if you have yto use milk, in a wine glass) so there is no residue of milk in the glass (if you know what i mean)
and to be really picky i dint like the reflection in the rim of the galss at the back right of the galss
and on the fron just to the right of the milk being proured in, its distracting
Shutter22
11th of May 2007 (Fri), 10:57
Thank you guys! I'll work on it. :)
Bollan
12th of May 2007 (Sat), 20:04
Milk in wine glass is a crime in my business ;-). I like the composition though. The front milk stains are not so attractive if one should be picky.
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