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roanjohn
14th of May 2004 (Fri), 15:31
Okay..........here they go.....

http://www.pbase.com/image/28800139/medium.jpg

http://www.pbase.com/image/28422274/medium.jpg

http://www.pbase.com/image/28800141/medium.jpg

http://www.pbase.com/image/28800142/medium.jpg

http://www.pbase.com/image/28844279/medium.jpg

I still need more confidence in taking pics in public. I mean.....what if they beat me up?? (Okay, thats the extreme......but you never know).

Would love to hear some critiques, techniques and some examples.

Ro1

karusel
14th of May 2004 (Fri), 15:50
Only the 4th one talked to me. And it is fantastic! 8)

Scottes
14th of May 2004 (Fri), 17:12
I like the second one.

But your processing seems off. The darks go to black far too early and you lose a lot of detail. Most of the whites are not so blown out that the blacks should be this dark. Actually, I don't know because I didn't take the pictures. But that's how they seem to me.

How are you processing?

roanjohn
15th of May 2004 (Sat), 13:41
Only the 4th one talked to me. And it is fantastic! 8)

Thanks Karusel!!!

But your processing seems off. The darks go to black far too early and you lose a lot of detail. Most of the whites are not so blown out that the blacks should be this dark. Actually, I don't know because I didn't take the pictures. But that's how they seem to me.


SCottes:

Could it be my monitor?? I do the regular auto level/contrast. Some lab sharpening and I use Channel Mixer to convert it to B&W. :-(

I am not exactly a VG post processer :oops:

Ro1