Tamara

[dennykyser]

Thanks for the earlier helpful coments and here is one I have worked on in PS. I am trying to get out of the habbit of putting the model in the center of the photo and to be more creative with my cropping. I have to admit its hard to break the nice clean centered crop. Look forward to your coments again.

http://ompi.onemodelplace.com/OMP_Images/Photographer/58389/58389_p_86C63AF6-2B3D-897A-24A65F5FE5C80FF7.jpg

[dennykyser]

http://ompi.onemodelplace.com/OMP_Images/Photographer/58389/58389_p_866EDC72-2B3D-897A-290EF428D8A8A67E.jpg

[PhotosGuy]

#2 - She's giving you a hard look + the sharpness is giving her a hard look, too. If you have Layers, I'd dupe it, add gaussian blur, then reduce the opacity 'till she looks softer. Then erase the blur over her eyes, mouth, etc.
I like #1 for the softness. Women are supposed to be, no?

[Andy_T]

I like the first pic.

Maybe the modern style garment is not totally in line with the style of the picture, and a white romantic summer dress with laces would be even better, but overall it's a great pic.

I'd make your copyright logo a lot smaller, however, and adjust the size of the (c) so that is at most the same height (including the circle) with the letters.

Best regards,
Andy