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minatophase3
16th of May 2004 (Sun), 11:33
I posted several pictures on the Share Photo's site, then realized I would like some help from those who take portraits. So, I will post my two favorite pictures here and ask for guidance on what could be done to make them better.

Picture #1
http://www.thenationfamily.com/images/girls/may04/modeling/mackenzie1.jpg


Picture #2
http://www.thenationfamily.com/images/girls/may04/modeling/mackenzie11.jpg

If anyone is interested in seeing more you can find them here: http://www.thenationfamily.com/girls.htm


Thanks for your help.

Tim
Conk
16th of May 2004 (Sun), 11:51
Very good. I would definately apply a soft focus to #2.
PhotosGuy
16th of May 2004 (Sun), 12:57
Nice! Maybe you could have someone hold a white card in front of her in #1 situations to bounce a bit of light into her eye sockets? That might also lighten the 'bags under her eyes' in #2.
Keep it up!
rick barclay
16th of May 2004 (Sun), 12:59
Top one's pretty as a picture.
minatophase3
16th of May 2004 (Sun), 22:13
Nice! Maybe you could have someone hold a white card in front of her in #1 situations to bounce a bit of light into her eye sockets? That might also lighten the 'bags under her eyes' in #2.
Keep it up!

Thanks for the tip. I didn't even notice the dark eye sockets until you said somthing :lol: . I was able to clean up the bags under her eyes a little in PS.

http://www.thenationfamily.com/images/girls/may04/modeling/mackenzie14.jpg

Thanks again.

Tim
PhotosGuy
16th of May 2004 (Sun), 22:44
Thanks for the tip.
That's what we're here for. She's looking very cute either way!