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Epluim
3rd of June 2007 (Sun), 12:30
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f219/epluim/Untitled-1balletcopy.jpg?t=1180891605
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f219/epluim/smaller.jpg?t=1180891694
This is my fist real try with a collage. Betsy's great because she's always so cute! :)
Like them? Hate them? Pointers?
GyRob
3rd of June 2007 (Sun), 12:39
LOOKS good but not keen on the empty basket at all.
Rob.
jamner
3rd of June 2007 (Sun), 13:47
I agree, they look good, but I don't care for the empty basket in the center of the 2nd one. I would replace that with a picture of her from the same shoot.
Kai
3rd of June 2007 (Sun), 15:19
I like them. I agree with replacing the empty basket. Maybe a close up of Betsy
Epluim
3rd of June 2007 (Sun), 15:39
Is the basket distracting? Upsetting?
Epluim
3rd of June 2007 (Sun), 15:58
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f219/epluim/3outfitscopy.jpg?t=1180904288
How is this? Better?
TSEE
4th of June 2007 (Mon), 12:54
Cute stuff. But its hard to go wrong with cute babies now isn't it? ;)
I like the first, maybe exchange that last one in that series for something at a different angle or a close up? Seems like the first and last on that collage are very similar with the feet shot between.
And I agree with the rest, nay to the empty basket, its suppose to be a collage with the baby the baby isn't in there. If I was buying a collage I'd want pictures of my baby in there not an empty basket unless it told a story and it didn't seem to convey anything right there. Just my 2 cents.
I like the last collage, the different images/clothing/settings worked nicely, again my only nit pick after seeing the other two collages would trade the last shot (the basket one) for the first one in the second collage, the one where she's drooling, I'd rather see that on my wall than her crying.
Looks like you got a good variety of shots tho. How old was she? About 6 months?
Lunajen
4th of June 2007 (Mon), 13:24
I thnk you did rather nice job with the collage. Not too much just enough and not a lot of extra graphic that aren't needed. Very nice.
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