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Lunajen
3rd of June 2007 (Sun), 21:49
Exactly what they are....senior portraits. Go head and tell me what you think...I had to some major editing for blemishes.

1.Original
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v371/jenduffy/Cameron00010.jpg

2.Midnight Sepia filter.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v371/jenduffy/Cameron00010MIDNIGHTSEPIA.jpg

3.Desautrated with Sepia filter and difused glow.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v371/jenduffy/Cameron00010copy-1.jpg

4.http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v371/jenduffy/Cameron00058copy.jpg

5.http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v371/jenduffy/Cameron00077BW.jpg

6.http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v371/jenduffy/Cameron00117copy.jpg

7.Original
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v371/jenduffy/Cameron00095.jpg

8.Difused glow and vingette.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v371/jenduffy/Cameron00095copy.jpg

amonline
3rd of June 2007 (Sun), 23:14
I like 5, but that last one makes him look like Howdy Doody. ;)

Lunajen
4th of June 2007 (Mon), 12:39
Five is probably my favorite too... ;)

TSEE
4th of June 2007 (Mon), 13:00
I like 4 and 5, the B&W and the poses worked well for him. I dunno what it is but #1 in all three formats don't work for me, maybe too much of a closeup?
#6 is a better "close up" but I don't care for the blown highlights on the left. He has a great smile and a good pose in that one tho.

Lunajen
4th of June 2007 (Mon), 13:07
Yeah, we were having a hard time that day to find a area in the park that was in shade. I couldn't decide if I liked number two or three of him.
But he was really sweet....wanted to keep me laughing.

Beegeeboss
4th of June 2007 (Mon), 17:03
Overall, I like them, but it looks like you tried to hard on the teeth. They look unnatural in the first 4 pics.

I really like #5 and #6

Lunajen
4th of June 2007 (Mon), 19:00
Actually I didn't do anything to his teeth other than go over them with the desaturation tool, set at 17%, and not that much. Maybe just a once over....

But thanks Beegeeboss!!

Mario.
4th of June 2007 (Mon), 19:03
5 is my favorite out of all of them. I find that for guys, soft-focus and diffused glows doesn't work so well. Try and shoot closer to the evening as well. :)

embdaw
4th of June 2007 (Mon), 19:14
I agree w/beegeeboss about the teeth, in the first few shots, thats all I see...but other than that, they look great..

Hellashot
4th of June 2007 (Mon), 20:08
I agree w/beegeeboss about the teeth, in the first few shots, thats all I see...but other than that, they look great..

Agree. His teeth stand out more than anything because it's the brightest part.

Lunajen
5th of June 2007 (Tue), 08:33
I think that was because of the diffused glow...but I had to go with some softening to hide the editting on his face....but thanks Hella, Mario, and embdaw for all the info and what to look for next time.... I appreciate it.