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ElitistK
5th of June 2007 (Tue), 01:02
I took some shots this evening with Kit lens at UCR Pentland and Glenmore. Critiques are welcomed...and desperately needed.

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y281/k3n_chu/pentland_1.jpg

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y281/k3n_chu/pentland_2.jpg

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y281/k3n_chu/glenmore_1.jpg

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y281/k3n_chu/glenmore_2.jpg

I had a hard time composing my shots..any suggestions?

mfreddo
5th of June 2007 (Tue), 01:42
2. Seems kinda of boring to me. Not really sure.
3. I like this one but the fence is a little distracting.
4. I think its the best. I like the almost symmetry and the contrast against the sky.

With landscape shots remember to try to have something in the foreground, middleground and background.

howzitboy
5th of June 2007 (Tue), 03:57
gosh, i cant think of anything to say. they show the building and street, but there is no real point of interest to keep u looking at them.
third would be best cept for that fence. sorry not much help tho.

Snapman
5th of July 2007 (Thu), 00:00
Just one little tip which you managed to do in #2 and that's to hold your camera so that the sides of buildings, posts and trees etc. are vertical in your picture.

Further than that, your pictures would benefit from some post processing.