Intermission...

[Saturation]

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[RyanCrane]

Its close. but the scene is just too distracting for me.. I dont knwo where im supposed to look so my eyes just get drawn to the red part of the strings.. which arent all the interesting..

I think you were close.. just un clutter it a bit.