Take a look please!

[tgelston]

Hey Folks,

This is off-topic of photography but I thought it would be a good place to post.
As part of my graduate project I created a series of tutorials for DW, FW and Flash. There are still a few rough patches but I would love it if you all took a few minutes and checked out the sections- Critques in both design and content are appreciated.

http://www.gelstoncafe.com/tutorials/

Thanks,
Tobias

[slejhamer]

I'm not qualified to comment on the content, but the design looks very functional if a bit text-book like. It's professional but not warm-and-fuzzy. I don't know who your intended audience is; so you may have achieved exactly what you want/need.

On the other hand, if I (someone with no real knowledge of the products) were surfing the web looking for a Macromedia tutorial site I'd prefer to see some examples of finished work right on the front page, or as a separate intro page prior to getting to the main page. You sort of did this with the links to the video overviews on the individual tutorial pages, but I just think it needs more up front. You know, something "flashy" to draw the viewer in and make them want to dig further into your work. :lol:

All in all though it's very well done, in my uninformed opinion. In fact, if I had an interest in any of those products I'd definitely bookmark the site as a reference. 8)