First wedding with Showitweb 6/09/07

[canotographer]

She's my cousin. A small budget wedding but memorable moments... The church was really dark with dark and high ceiling...and different light sources was another big problem... quite tough sitauation to me as a first time wedding shooter...Anyway, this is a long version (12mins). A ceremony version and a Rock version are being made...C&C are welcome.. just be gentle ;)

http://www.stephotography.net/Winnieandkai/index.html

[Tragerman]

Yes, this is the loooonnng version.. ;-) There are a lot of very nice images here. The presentation needs continuity and tempo. Music that changes with the current phase of the story would help. Reduce the number of similar shots. Mix up the speed, and don't alternate between color and BW on single shots. Have a few of color then a few bw. Don't always have movement that lasts and lasts. Make the movements more subtle and don't linger so long. I think you did a nice job with the photos. Keep working on the slideshow. It has more potential.

-Mickey

[canotographer]

Thank you Mickey for your comments. I will try to work on a shorter version with your advice in mind. :)