Old moped, comments please :)

[arumdevil]

I tried to make this old abandoned Vespa look interesting, do you think I succeeded? any comments/tips appreciated.

http://www.arumdevil.com/galleries/imgs/pls/IMG_1295.jpg

http://www.arumdevil.com/galleries/imgs/pls/IMG_1299.jpg

http://www.arumdevil.com/galleries/imgs/pls/IMG_1300.jpg

http://www.arumdevil.com/galleries/imgs/pls/IMG_1302.jpg

the second is my favorite.

thanks,
arumdevil

[ndh]

Well, I'm not expert enough to give tips, but I love photos of old vehicles so I'm going to throw in my 2 cents!

My favourite is #2 as well, with the "vespa" logo up front in focus. Second-favourite is the shot of the whole moped. I wonder if moving it to a spot with more/taller weeds would enhance the impression that it's been there for a while?

[arumdevil]

thanks for your comments. There aren't any taller weeds so I'll just have to wait for those ones to get taller! also it it has been covered by a plastic tarp all winter so the weeds didn't really get a chance to grow up around it much.